Humanities Homework Help

This essay was solid, but my professor had some notes, please see the following, please re-sumbit to me!!

The given thesis should be included in the introduction.
Cite the quotes according to MLA guidelines.
The essay makes some solid points and presents some good examples to demonstrate such. However, it has significant organizational problems. The main argument proving the thesis statement is unclear and not present throughout. Also, significant portions of the narrative are not addressed as evidence/proof/a demonstration of the argument being made.
As a draft, this is a solid start, but as a final essay more time is needed. Going forward with such assignments spend more time outlining your argument, points being made, examples used, and then do the writing.