Article writing homework help

Hi, i wrote this research paper for my writing class. And here is my first draft. However, my professor said i need to revise my paper. I want to look for a writer to help me with that who might have a strong writing ability. So i’ve attached my first draft and the revision guide below. Please contact me if you could help, thanks!
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