Humanities Homework Help

Thank you for continuing your analysis of Hayden’s “Those Sunday Mornings” in your Week 1 Project. I like how you are focusing on the theme of the sacrifices of parenting. You can state that you are examining this theme through Hayden’s use of symbolism in your intro.(feedback for the rough draft in week 1)

Consider the feedback you received on the Week 1 rough draft from your instructor, peers, and Smarthinking (if your paper was submitted for review), and determine what changes you want to make. Consider:

• Do you need a more engaging opener or a stronger thesis?
• Do you need to reinforce your arguments and add more supporting evidence?
• Do you have areas to develop or clarify?
• Are you satisfied with your conclusion?