Humanities Homework Help

I’m working on a humanities writing question and need support to help me understand better.

The question is (You need to describe an incident when you met (or saw) a person who influenced you in a way that you immediately understood the concept of leadership. And then based upon this influence, you would give your OWN DEFINITION OF LEADERSHIP. ) and already I wrote my story and need to improve the sentences with better language and grammar as well as to make the paragraph and definition of leadership longer with more description of the situations.