Humanities Homework Help

Directions:

Rewrite the flawed correspondence, “Fourth Quarter Goals” below using a more positive less commanding tone to achieve better audience involvement and motivation.  Please keep the format of the correspondence. Complete the assignment in a Microsoft Word document and upload. 

To: Staff

Subject: Fourth Quarter Goals

Due to a severe lack of discipline, the company failed to meet third quarter goals. To avoid repeating this disaster for the fourth quarter, this is what I think you all must  do – ASAP.

1. Demand that the sales department increase cold calls by 15 percent.

2. Require weekly progress reports by all sales staff.

3. Penalize employees when reports are not provided on time.

4. Tell managers to keep on top of their staff, pushing them to meet these goals.