Writing Homework Help

You have a good start to this assignment Kerry. However, you did not focus on the competition of another center opening that will be able to offer new equipment, longer hours of care for families, and higher salaries for teachers. I have listed below the areas that need to be improved to improve your grade. You have 2 more attempts to update the assignment to improve your grade. Please let me know if you have any questions. – Mike

Areas for Improvement:

Criterion 1 – 2/4 – Although you addressed areas that need improvement, you did not address the situation of a new center opening nearby. Please add details from the scenario given about what the other center is able to offer and why this could be problematic for your own center.

Criterion 4 – 1/4 – You did not share 3 potential budget solutions to improve your center without spending a lot of money. Please share 3 ideas on how you can improve your center to make it more competitive with the new center without exceeding your budget.

Criterion 5 – 2/4 – You did share what you plan to do to improve your center. However, your solution should be a decision between the 3 potential solutions you need to add for criterion 4. Once you add 3 possible solutions for criterion 4, please choose one to move forward with and explain why you choose that option.