Writing Homework Help

I have done my final drafts paper but I need you please to use the feedback I received from my classmates to edit the paper and make more stronger! So, please attached the files in this question and let me know if you have any questions regard to it focus principally on the content, because that is worth a lot more than the formatting on the final paper. Do you have clear lines of argument that support your thesis? Are your lines of argument supported by evidence and sound logic? Can you back up your claims and statements? These are the things that will be most important on the final paper.

please do it perfectly bacuse this paper has more than %25 of my final grade