Writing Homework Help

write an essay on how being good at bids improves your friendships

Correct Format:

Your name, class name, assignment name top left corner

Double spaced with each paragraph indented and written correctly

Each paragraph needs to have 10-12 sentences

Title: Interesting, short, capitalized and written correctly Do NOT bold or underline or make font bigger

Correct Format:

Your name, class name, assignment name top left corner

Double spaced with each paragraph indented and written correctly

Each paragraph needs to have 10-12 sentences

Title: Interesting, short, capitalized and written correctly Do NOT bold or underline or make font bigger

Introduction Paragraph

Interesting hook
Explain hook and relate it to book using author’s name, book title and information about the author
Explain what the book is about and define terms bids for connection
Explain why the book is important and people should read it

Make a thesis statement to include the following: Topic = Understanding bids for connection + How we feel = we can improve / enhance our relationships + How we write= recognize mistakes making bids, mistakes receiving bids, and avoid bid busters

Body Paragraph #1 outline – making good bids

Transition + topic sentence that three good things you do when making a bid friendships with to others are 1,2,3.
Transition + main idea sentence about idea 1.
Context + quote from book illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence. Transition + main idea sentence about idea 2.
Context + quote from book illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.
Transition + main idea sentence about idea 3.
Context + quote from book illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.

Body Paragraph #2 outline – receiving bids in a positive way

Transition + Create your topic sentence to include the three ways you are good at receiving bids from friendships
Transition + main point 1 sentence: Your first way of positively receiving a bid
Context + Quote from text supporting the idea of this kind of mistake
Explanation of the quote in terms of your way of positively receiving a bid
Transition + main point 2 sentence: Another way of positively receiving a bid
Context + Quote from text supporting the idea of this kind of mistake
Explanation of the quote in terms of your way of positively receiving a bid
Transition + main point 3 sentence: Your third way of positively receiving a bid
Context + Quote from text supporting the idea of this kind of mistake:
Explanation of the quote in terms of your way of positively receiving a bid

Body Paragraph #3 outline – your personal story of making or receiving a bid in a way that really went well friendships.

T.ransition + topic sentence: Agreeing or disagreeing with the author’s main idea that through being a good bidder, we can maintain positive relationships with those around us.

Explain the experience in vivid detail: Using transitions to move through time, tell us the story of a [positive experience where bidding really went well and why Include

• Who?
• What?
• Where?
• Why?
• When?

Transition + main idea sentence stating why technique[s] you employed worked well and how this supports or negates the author’s claim.
Context + quote from text that speaks to your main point.
Explanation of why you believe the technique worked

Conclusion Paragraph

College level transition + restate thesis in different words
Transition + 2 sentences that summarize ideas in body paragraph #1
Transition + 2 sentences that summarize ideas in body paragraph #2
Transition + 2 sentences that summarize ideas in body paragraph #3
Additional ending strategies like full circle, new quote or question, prediction or advice
Last sentence in your own words