Writing Homework Help

I have this assignment Due in 2 days and I will provide all the information and if you finish it earlier I will appreciate it. I uploaded the prompt you will be doing the Final Draft for this assignment and I will upload the Rough Draft that I did. Also, I will provide the professor comments about the Rough Draft read it carefully and do the final draft. Please understand the professor comment that start work on it. If there is anything else please let me know.

Professor Comment

You have some great content here and very effective quotes from your subject. However, your organization of ideas needs some work. I would recommend taking a look at the two sample profiles as well as the prompt again, and organizing your profile in a similar way and according to the information that is asked for in the prompt. You have a lot of paragraphs on different topics and it is difficult to follow how your ideas are connected.