Writing Homework Help

Hii, all i need just read the essay and write a little bit brief for it. total will be 500 words thanks a lot !!!

Dear All,

This forwarded email includes the attachment of the draft you are to critique. Please write your response as a reply email to this forwarded email, and please Cc: me

Work to be as specific as possible about the points you raise concerning this draft. Please situate your reader with an opening sentence in which you name the draft and the author of the draft. (If you wish to revert to second person after the opening of your critique, that’s fine.)

Please remember to focus upon the content of the draft – the topic, the thesis, the structure of the argument. Keep the prompt in mind as you read. Please, do not get distracted by matters of style or format, of grammar or punctuation. This is a rough draft – we are concerned with the content.

Be generous, be constructive, and read carefully.

Thank you,