Writing Homework Help

I need the following highlighted portion to be edited for final submission. Below is the overall response to the paper please review that as well and the following adjustments that were recommended.

Julia,
There was much to like about your paper, but some modifications are needs. You need to present the paternity uncertainty hypothesis and the hypothesized differences among the various grandparent types in the Introduction, along with the findings of previous studies. You have this information, but you don’t present it until the Discussion section. Also, your figure was impossible to follow. What was the Y axis? There were difference measures for each variable, making a figure inappropriate. Present means in a table in the Results section, not in the appendix..