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Columbus State Community College Ring Erosion Problem in the SRM Joints Memorandum

 

The memo you need to rewrite is attached to this question in a PDF file.

Business Memo Rewrite Instructions: The goals of this assignment are to 1) apply technical writing styles in a real-world application and 2) recognize the importance of audience when writing technical documents.

Consider the purpose of the memo, audience, clarity of the memo, structure of information, language & writing style.

Writing Prompt 1: Imagine you worked for MTI and were writing this memo as an email today –think about what would you do differently to communicate the main idea more effectively? (You will be rewriting the memo with your changes for this prompt.)

Writing Prompt 2: Now imagine you are writing an email to NASA (your client) to inform them of this. What would you change from the internal team email in Prompt 1 to a client email? List3-5 changes you would make and explain why you would make those changes.