Writing Homework Help

I have my Comparative Analysis Essay draft but I need to add more writing for my final essay. Please read the draft essay and watch the feedback videos that I am attaching. You just have to watch the feedback video and revise the final paper based on what she wants to add to my Literary Analysis essay.

This is the link for the book

http://www.eastoftheweb.com/short-stories/UBooks/L…

ESSAY DRFT AND FEEDBACK