Writing Homework Help

I’m working on a english question and need an explanation to help me learn.

Watch the following sets of videos and comment on the differences between the “Needs Improvement” version compared to the “Final” version. Comment on content organization and the overall delivery aspects (eye contact, vocals, etc) that the speaker has on his and her two videos.

“The Hidden World of Chili Peppers”:

Needs Improvement:

Final Version:

“Animal Helpers”:

Needs Improvement:

Final Version:

Create a thread and write your own assessment on both sets of videos with your thoughts on the speaker’s organization, preparation, and delivery.