Writing Homework Help

Write an essay on how being good at bids improves your relationships

Make a thesis statement to include the following: Topic = Understanding bids for connection + How we feel = we can improve / enhance our relationships + How we write= recognize mistakes making bids, mistakes receiving bids, and avoid bid busters

Body Paragraph #1 outline –  making good bids

Transition + topic sentence that three good things you do when making a bid to others are 1,2,3.
Transition + main idea sentence about idea 1.
Context + quote from book illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.Transition + main idea sentence about idea 2.
Context + quote from book illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.
Transition + main idea sentence about idea 3.
Context + quote from book illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.

Body Paragraph #2 outline –  receiving bids in a positive way

Transition + Create your topic sentence to include the three ways you are good at receiving bids from others.
Transition + main point 1 sentence: Your first way of positively receiving a bid
Context + Quote from text supporting the idea of this kind of mistake
Explanation of the quote in terms of your way of positively receiving a bid
Transition + main point 2 sentence:  Another way of positively receiving a bid
Context + Quote from text supporting the idea of this kind of mistake
Explanation of the quote in terms of your way of positively receiving a bid
Transition + main point 3 sentence: Your third way of positively receiving a bid
Context + Quote from text supporting the idea of this kind of mistake:
Explanation of the quote in terms of your way of positively receiving a bid

Body Paragraph #3 outline – your personal story of making or receiving a bid in a way that really went well

Transition + topic sentence: Agreeing or disagreeing with the author’s main idea that through being a good bidder, we can maintain positive relationships with those around us.

Explain the experience in vivid detail: Using transitions to move through time, tell us the story of a [positive experience where bidding really went well and why Include

• Who?
• What?
• Where?
• Why?
• When?

Transition + main idea sentence stating why technique[s] you employed worked well and how this supports or negates the author’s claim.
Context + quote from text that speaks to your main point.
Explanation of why you believe the technique worked