Writing Homework Help

Read carefully the Reed Supermarkets case in your case packet (link to purchase the case packet available on the first page of the syllabus; the case packet is not part of your custom bundle). Collins has hired a team of BUS498 students as consultants to help her solve the problems she is facing. The students made a presentation (see the PPT slide deck below) to Collins and her team of senior managers. Please critique the SUBSTANCE of this presenation in 150-250 words. Do NOT focus on issues such as the following: there was a typo, the font was too small, slides were too wordy, etc.